Tuesday, July 7, 2009

his breath on my neck,
eyes close as lips waver-
anticipation...

3 comments:

  1. I actually wrote this haiku about a month ago, but failed to put it on here. It's actually one of my favorites that I've done. For some reason, I thought of it yesterday.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Nice, Kristin...fine sensuousness :)

    wishes,
    devika

    ReplyDelete
  3. I never told the stroy behind this haiku. It is about my first kiss with my husband. It was one of the most romantic moments of my life. We were sixteen and were slow-dancing. He waited until the VERY end of the song to kiss me...and I will never forget that feeling of waiting for it. It made the kiss even sweeter. I had been in love with him for a long time at this point, so it was a long-awaited moment. :)

    ReplyDelete