Sunday, February 7, 2010

staring at
the dismantled crib
in their spare bedroom,
she prays that the groundhog's
prediction is wrong

10 comments:

  1. Punxsutawney, thought it may be fun to insert this tongue-twister, i am with you on your wish but was the groundhog ever wrong?

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  2. Groundhogs abounding these days. Here's one I posted a tikkis's blog, in response to one of his. I'll post it at mine, too.

    Groundhog Day
    the toddler points
    at her shadow

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  3. This kind of makes me want to pray too, Kristin....well penned; had similar things in my life -- May the prayers be heard,

    wishes,
    devika

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  4. groundhog's historical votings are in Internet, but they didn't say which ones were true ones .-)

    here is one more:

    Groundhog Day --
    after nine months
    the long nights

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  5. Phil can be moody, ignore him...love what you wrote ;)

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  6. I'm in agreement with Lorraine.
    Ignore Phil!
    Love this too!

    Margie:)

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  8. Karol Rosiak said...
    Kristin,
    Interesting tanka.

    Moonbathing. A journal of womens tanka:

    http://origa.livejournal.com/

    Wishes,
    Karol

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  9. Lovely.. enjoyed this one.. :))

    Take care

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