Monday, November 15, 2010

afternoon traffic-
a V of geese waits
for no one

backseat tales of
playground adventures-I turn
the radio off

a whispered prayer
resonates above the horn-
braking just in time

12 comments:

  1. Thank God, beautiful prayer Kristin, awesome writing...stay well

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  2. good mix, Kristin :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. A nice set of haiku, Kristin...

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  4. Beautiful scenes from everyday life. You are a good mom.

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  5. I especially like the first haiku.

    Adelaide

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  6. Grand, as always Kristin!
    __The afterjoy of a successful day. Good wishes, Kristin, to you and yours. _m

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  7. I especially like "backseat tales."

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  8. there is something about a V of geese, like that of the sound of a train's whistle in the distant darkness, that adds such depth to one's written words..

    write that novel, so you can get started on the next...

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  9. You have a magical touch Kristin. A beautiful set.

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  10. Thank you all so much for the kind comments! They mean so much! :)

    -Kristin

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  11. "A whispered prayer resonates above the horn" I love it, what a nice piece of writing. Thank you.

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