Sunday, May 22, 2011

I am teaching a poetry unit in my classroom right now. I have this one student, David, who is particularly clever. On the day we covered haiku, this was his contribution:

haiku is tricky
never know how it will end-
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I loved this. It's SO him...random and funny. Not bad for an eleven year old! He always makes me laugh. :)

8 comments:

  1. So good!
    It would here, too!

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  2. Hey David... keep at it! This is a good one and in proper count too!
    _m

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  3. the guy seem to be having fun with haiku :)...but, on the contrary, i always, wonder "what do i know of haiku"...it definitely is not just a 5-7-5 connecting nature with man, or vice-versa (though that could be the definition?)--

    wishes,
    devika

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  4. LOL this is fantastic Kristin, I love it :) a nd how are yoU and the babies

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  5. Ican't ge tmy profile photo in let me try again
    nope no can do

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  6. Thank you everyone! I'm glad you enjoyed this, too. Lorraine...the babies are fantastic...growing VERY quickly. I feel blessed just to watch it happen. ;) Thanks for asking! Hope you are well!

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