Sunday, July 1, 2012

salty on her lips,
the taste of summer
from his brow-
the longest day becomes
the longest night...

6 comments:

  1. To the taste of summer and happy July - Glad to see creativity stirring in the sultry winds once again…

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  2. Salty, indeed. What about the present tense: "becomes," rather than "became."

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  3. Thank you, all! Bill...I liked your suggestion and I used it. :) Thanks!

    -K

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  4. consumed
    from one bell ring to the next
    time's client

    __I do not forget; so often, though, time is expended without touching all things... that touch my interest... trying to visit all my blog friends.


    __That taste, as passed from he to you... that telling of summer. Lovely! _m

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