Monday, December 7, 2009

sleeping
in the middle of the bed-
absent moon
(Missing him...ten weeks down, two to go...I'm getting weary.)

6 comments:

  1. oh! thats a long time...nice poem, Kristin :)

    sleeping in the middle of the bed...something very majestic about it, though the poem talks about loneliness :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Hope time flies for you. Lovely poem

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  3. Before you blink, he'll be back, in the meantime pour it all on paper, your eloquence and sentiments help others x

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  4. A beautifully observed moment...

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  5. A nice one - a weary soul - does he read your written thoughts?

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  6. Thank you all so much. Ashi- yes, he does...we talk about them every night on the phone right now. He doesn't write poetry, but appreciates the fact that I do. He likes them. :)

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