somber lullaby
carries me away-
train song
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mournful cry-
the conductor
going nowhere
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balancing on
very thin rails-
am I on track?
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I'm in love with this train trio, I love trains, I love its mourning sound in the distance, I love your words, always sweet Kristin )
ReplyDeleteLove this Kristin!
ReplyDeleteI just saw a train yesterday and I was wishing I was on it!
Have a nice weekend!
Margie:)
The train set is wonderful. Three completely different ideas, but they fit together perfectly. What inspired them?
ReplyDeleteThank you Margie and Lorraine!
ReplyDeleteSandy...thank you also, and to answer your question, I was sitting on my couch last night literally listening to the nearby midnight train. I just love the sound of it...always inspiring. I have no idea how these three very different haiku came about...just sitting there listening, these just popped into my brain. Some of my best ones just appear like that somehow. It's a mystery to me. Those are the ones that I consider to be little gifts. :) They suprise me, too! Thanks again!!!
I like 'em, separately and together.
ReplyDeleteLike them all. Second one is my fav
ReplyDeleteA very nice set Kristin...
ReplyDeletethis is beautiful, and i am there riding in your words...
ReplyDeleteThank you all so very much!!!
ReplyDelete"train song
ReplyDeleteam I on track
going nowhere"
___Ooooops... I borrowed your words, a mix of L3's; this an imaginative triplet, Kristin!
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