winter chill-
your warm whispers
tickle my ear
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About Me
- Kristin Riggs
- I have had a passion for the written word, especially poetry, from an early age. I am first and foremost a child of God-a thankful recipient of His grace. I am also a mother, a teacher, a singer,and an overall music lover. I call the beautiful southern United States home, and growing up and raising my family here has shaped who I am in many ways. I believe that life- with its various emotions, experiences, trials, and joys-is a gift from my Heavenly Father. As a poet, I hope that my work expresses this. "My soul finds rest in God alone; my salvation comes from Him." -Psalm 62:1 Some of my poetry has been published in the online journals Simply Haiku and Notes from the Gean.
This tickles me. You could also try this sort of variation
ReplyDeletewinter chill
the warmth
of your whisper
not as a correction (the original is fine as is), but as a second haiku.
Thanks, Bill. I really like your version, too. either way...the whispers are warm, so I'll take it! :)
ReplyDeleteLove it!
ReplyDeleteMargie:)
Yes I can see getting shivers from that ;) lol well done Kristin
ReplyDeleteLovely Kristin.
ReplyDeleteKristin... Magyar has been my nick-name since I was born... my Hungarian side.
ReplyDelete__I scribble and it's _m, my friends call me Magyar (Mudj-yor) or Doug; you, Kristin, are a friend.
__I truely like your soft, warm and deeply felt poetry... as always. Doug
Lovely!!
ReplyDeleteTake care
Very nice poems, since i was gone, Kristin :)
ReplyDeletewishes,
devika