Sunday, January 31, 2010

winter chill-
your warm whispers
tickle my ear

8 comments:

  1. This tickles me. You could also try this sort of variation

    winter chill
    the warmth
    of your whisper

    not as a correction (the original is fine as is), but as a second haiku.

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  2. Thanks, Bill. I really like your version, too. either way...the whispers are warm, so I'll take it! :)

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  3. Yes I can see getting shivers from that ;) lol well done Kristin

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  4. Kristin... Magyar has been my nick-name since I was born... my Hungarian side.
    __I scribble and it's _m, my friends call me Magyar (Mudj-yor) or Doug; you, Kristin, are a friend.
    __I truely like your soft, warm and deeply felt poetry... as always. Doug

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  5. Very nice poems, since i was gone, Kristin :)

    wishes,
    devika

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