Thursday, March 18, 2010

hanging them
on the crescent moon,
these thoughts
I'm just too tired
to think...

(at the end of a busy week......exhausted. ONE DAY 'TIL SPRING BREAK!!! :)

12 comments:

  1. This is very moving...

    Enjoy your Spring Break!

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  2. Thanks, Wanda. Good to see you on here again. :) I will enjoy it!!!

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  3. I love how you put things in abeyance :)

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  4. I know the feeling!
    This is a good tanka, so much emotion in these lines.

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  5. I can feel the weight within this poem Kristin.

    waiting for spring -
    the wind
    is sighing too

    Best wishes
    Paul

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  6. Enjoy spring break, Kristin.
    Coming at just the right time, huh?

    I enjoyed your poem.

    Margie :)

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  7. Hanging those thoughts on the crescent moon... enjoy your time off with your family!

    Best wishes, Kristin! _m

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  8. I generally don't comment on tanka, since I rarely write them, but I really like this.

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  9. Wow...thank you everyone! I really appreciate all the kind words. Bill...you should try a tanka. Anyone who write beautiful haiku like yours would surely be a master at writing tanka as well. :)

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  10. I meant "writes"...leave it to the English teacher. Subject-verb agreement is very important to me. Unfortunately, my fingers get away from me sometimes when I type. :) Oops.

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  11. your thoughts resting, your spirit growing, Happy Spring Break!

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