Friday, November 27, 2009


11 comments:

  1. Now, you mean to say those million stars are your captive! :))

    anyway, i think this is one of your best, Kristin....love the first three lines :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Oh, Devika...that is so sweet. I would love to think that I could hold stars captive, but I think I had it right the first time! :) You are very kind to say that, though.
    Thank you so much!!!

    Kristin

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  3. orion smiles at this artistic composition


    with his belt of three
    this giant hunter stands tall
    holding club and shield

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  4. Oh well, Kristin i never meant to say, its first time you got it right....Like sometimes its just a moment's spurt....i found a kind of spark here :)

    think of it, I always loved your poems so much, :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  5. Devika...you're fine! I was joking around with you. I always love your comments. :)

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  6. And the captive writes about this fascination. Good one, Kristin.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  7. Lovely Taiga Kristin, hmm no offence but I think Devika had a point, maybe it should have stayed a Haiga, I do not know.
    As a photo interested person I would have like a slightly bigger picture when I click on the photo, maybe you could....
    Nevertheless a fine contribution Kristin, dont doubt that :)

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  8. always so humbling and mystifying recounting the stories in the sky, just lovely...

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  9. Thank you all!

    Ashi...no offense taken! I always appreciate suggestions and ideas. I can see what you mean...I just had one of those stubborn writing moments!!! I was determined to use the word captive Orion being a hunter...maybe I should have let that go. Stubborness and writing don't go well together, huh? ha ha. I'll work at the picture thing...still not too sure what I'm doing there! :) Have a wonderful week.

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