Take me away
to some secret place
where moonlight
shines...
falls...
drips onto my skin,
like silver raindrops- sliding
to that part of my cheek
where your hand takes over...
Take me away
to some shadowy place
where darkness
whispers...
lures...
hides us from the world,
'til I can only feel-seeing
you, not with my eyes,
but with my fingertips...
Take me away
to some quiet place
where silence
lives...
breathes...
inspires us to listen
closer than ever before-hearing
the music we make
when all the noise is gone...
Sunday, November 15, 2009
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Is there a place like this...Such a nice feel...Surreal, dreamy...
ReplyDeleteA symphony of sentiments, beautiful flow of love, I pray always for peace :)
ReplyDeleteReading this with the sound of your Moonlight sonate adagio by Bethoven makes this perfect.
ReplyDeleteLovely ... I think we both dream of this place.
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ReplyDeleteOh, so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteLoved this poem, Kristin!
Margie:)
secret places of the heart, under mystical moonlight, you have creatively romanticized with the whispering rhythm of touch...
ReplyDeleteTanka
beneath the moonlight
where romantic lovers play
light soft and silent
only eyes of the hearts can see
fingertips compose love songs
Thank you all for your comments!
ReplyDeleteFiveReflections...I left a comment on your blog, but I wanted to say here as well that your tanka is beautiful!!!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully romantic, Kritin :)
ReplyDeleteloved it,
wishes,
devika
Oh sorry, Kristin...typo in name is horrible!:)
ReplyDeletewishes,
devika
Such a beautiful poetry... loved it Kristin.. thanks for sharing.. :))
ReplyDeleteTake care
... sometimes the best music, is the silence we find in ourselves. Beautiful! _m
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