Sunday, November 15, 2009

Take Me...

Take me away
to some secret place
where moonlight
shines...
falls...
drips onto my skin,
like silver raindrops- sliding
to that part of my cheek
where your hand takes over...

Take me away
to some shadowy place
where darkness
whispers...
lures...
hides us from the world,
'til I can only feel-seeing
you, not with my eyes,
but with my fingertips...

Take me away
to some quiet place
where silence
lives...
breathes...
inspires us to listen
closer than ever before-hearing
the music we make
when all the noise is gone...

13 comments:

  1. Is there a place like this...Such a nice feel...Surreal, dreamy...

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  2. A symphony of sentiments, beautiful flow of love, I pray always for peace :)

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  3. Reading this with the sound of your Moonlight sonate adagio by Bethoven makes this perfect.

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  5. Oh, so beautiful!
    Loved this poem, Kristin!

    Margie:)

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  6. secret places of the heart, under mystical moonlight, you have creatively romanticized with the whispering rhythm of touch...

    Tanka

    beneath the moonlight
    where romantic lovers play
    light soft and silent
    only eyes of the hearts can see
    fingertips compose love songs

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  7. FiveReflections...I left a comment on your blog, but I wanted to say here as well that your tanka is beautiful!!!

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  8. Beautifully romantic, Kritin :)

    loved it,

    wishes,
    devika

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  9. Oh sorry, Kristin...typo in name is horrible!:)


    wishes,
    devika

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  10. Such a beautiful poetry... loved it Kristin.. thanks for sharing.. :))

    Take care

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  11. ... sometimes the best music, is the silence we find in ourselves. Beautiful! _m

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