Sunday, November 8, 2009

his grin says it all-
autumn morning spent speaking
our secret language
(in response to Paul's post on Paper Moon today...and of course, dedicated to my husband Derek)

8 comments:

  1. Hey Kristin! Thanks for the kind comment you left at my blog - very much appreciated. I love the variety of fine work at your blog - your passion for the written word is obviously strong, and we're better off for it. Lovely work.

    Liam

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  2. Thank you, Liam! So glad to have you visit here and I look forward to sharing poetry and thoughts with you in the future. :)

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  3. I had my smile already on this, at Paul's
    always nice to read you, Kristin :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  4. That's truly sweet.. secret language.. :))

    Take care

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  5. What a lovely, lovely moment, you say it so softly :)

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  6. This lets us in, but not all the way. Which is as it should be. A variatg possibility would be to cut this down:

    his grin
    says it all–-
    autumn morning

    leaving more work for the reader. That's not a criticism of the way you've done it.

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