Monday, October 5, 2009

I feel you...

in the rustling
that whispers my name,
desire confessing

in the soft rain
that slides down my back,
fingers caressing

in the fragile leaves
that can't help but fall,
surrender sweet

in the nightsong
that burns throught the chill,
sultry beat

yes, I feel you.


  1. Oh, I love this poem, Kristin.
    It's simply breathtaking!


  2. Thank you so much, Margie...and I wanted to tell you that your comment on my poem last night made my day. It means so much to know that my writing somehow spoke to you concerning something going on in your life. That's what this is all about, isn't it? Touching the lives of others through art. It's such a blessing to be a part of it.

  3. Nice poem, Kristin :)


  4. You've got me....I'm addicted to your writing girl!!!

  5. Wow Julie! What a compliment...thank you so much! :)

  6. Beautiful Kristin. A gift to start my day, thank you.

  7. Romantic, sensuous, beautiful. Love this Kristin.

  8. Kristin
    Yes, touching others through our art is truly a blessing.
    And your poem really did help me and I feel so much better since "I just let go" of what was troubling me.
    It was something I had no control over anyway and was just causing me useless strife.

    Thanks so much letting me know that your comment meant that much to you.

    Joy and blessings to you, always.


  9. Oh gosh, meant to say...Thanks so much for letting me know that 'my' comment meant that much to you.

    When I write in a hurry I always seem to make mistakes...LOl
    Preview, next time, Margie!

  10.'re fine! When handwriting, I rarely make a mistake, but when typing, I seem to get way ahead of myself!!! :) I'm so glad that you've let go of whatever it was. Life is too short to hang on to things that just hurt us. Good for you!!!

    Lorraine, Janice, and Paul...thank you, thank you, thank you!!! Your sweet words mean so much!

  11. Kristin,
    __Beautiful... is some times a pale and over used word; due to my failure in finding a better choice, your verse is... beautiful! _m

  12. Magyar,
    Thank you from the bottom of my heart...and no worries, you're words are never pale, dear friend!!!


  13. coffee shop, lovers, rain and Paris...can't help feeling romantic.

  14. Ahhh...happy sigh, BJE. :) I know what you mean.