Friday, October 9, 2009

after the storm,
a lullaby of raindrops-
pianissimo
(This is my response to Andy's post tonight on Past Tense...)

7 comments:

  1. Its nice and i read it there, Kristin :)

    on Past Tense -- 'at Past Tense' is more right? just the teacher or the student in me, :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Stunning sequence, bravo Kristin :)

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  3. Beautiful, Kristin!
    So soothing to me!

    Margie:)

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  4. Great verse! And I think (but I don't know): without "a lullaby of" it is a wonderful haiku.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  5. Very beautiful Kristin!! Your work always gives me such a sense of peace!!!!

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