Friday, October 2, 2009

I breathe better
when you're breathing
beside me.

11 comments:

  1. My husband is home for the weekend. It's so good to feel his warmth again...how I've missed it!!! I will sleep soundly tonight. :)

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  2. ha! I know :)
    nice poem and if he reads this, am sure he will be warmer tonight, :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. Beautifully put Kristin.

    I breathe better
    when you're breathing
    beside me

    no hint of loneliness
    in the star-filled sky

    A tan renga to start your day.

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  4. Aww...thank you Devika.

    Paul...beautiful. Nothing I love more that when my fellow poets respond in verse. :) Makes my heart smile.

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  5. Love it Kristin... love is in the air :)

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  6. Hello Kristin
    Love this (it's lovely!) and I can so relate.
    My hubby always tells me "come to bed, I sleep better when you are next to me."
    (He is so sweet!)
    I tend to stay up too late reading but lately I follow his call and he does sleep better.

    Enjoy your time with your husband, Kristin.
    Happy weekend to both of you!

    Margie:)

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  7. "RIA" - air in reverse, not original, but i thought of this word after i read your poem...:)

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  8. So beautiful, and touching, prayers always :)

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