Tuesday, September 22, 2009

abandoned tricycle
falls victim to the wind-
first day of autumn

6 comments:

  1. this has a pleasant melancholy feeling, suitable for autumn.

    Adelaide

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  2. I see this, you have such a way Kristin ;)

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  3. A touch of sadness makes this a great haiku for the seasonal change...

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  4. nice poem, good image. it's always refreshing to find another poet who doesn't think haiku must be 5-7-5.

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  5. Thank you all. This was inspired by the little red tricycle lying in our backyard. There is more than one layer to this. It's about the change of season of course, but also about my little one growing up. She got a big girl bike the other day...another season in her little life as well.

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