Saturday, September 5, 2009

just before dawn,
birds greet the gray morning
in softest song-
first movement,
pianissimo

4 comments:

  1. Serenade...beautiful, Kristin :)

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  2. Lovely tanka, Kristin :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. Thank you both! I love that you used the word "serenade", Lorraine, because I played around with that very word forever last night. Somehow I just couldn't make it fit into the poem itself, though...so glad you said it for me!!! :)

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  4. Mmmm... I can hear them now. Lovely!

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