Tuesday, August 11, 2009

clinging to
promises of old, in search
of present comfort-
a falling star catches
my eye...

6 comments:

  1. nice poem Kristin...i love your writing :)

    & i just read in newspaper of the Perseids meteor shower between August 8 and 14...and last night around 1- 1.30 i saw those streaks of light like little stars...there were so many..and was wondering if my vision had some defect..

    You too saw it? It was indeed a delight to see...the report says it will be visible only in Northern hemisphere

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. I'm actually watching right now...and still waiting for another one. :)

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  3. Beautiful!! When I was a teenager , s friend of mine and me would lay her driveway and watch for falling stars. They are so fascinating!

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  4. Nice one. Line two is powerful.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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