Saturday, August 15, 2009

single star
peeks through the branches then
disappears again-
front porch rocking chair creaks
in rhythm with the night

6 comments:

  1. Line four is a great mixture of word'n'sound. Good one, Kristin.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  2. wonderful writing girl!! You are very talented:)

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  3. I too i like this, Kristin
    always love your style of writing, :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  4. Thank you all!!! I've always kept my writing private for the most part, but I could get used to sharing it with this kind of response! It brings me so much joy to know that others are enjoying it or relating to it in some way. So thank you for all of your comments!

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